How to make a Hangi
What makes it good...
*gives instructions how to do it
*uses explaining words to do thing properly
*tells you what you need for it
*gives you a suggestion what to do while you wait for it to cook
*good description on the instructions
*uses time explaining words like first and finally
*uses one main idea per paragraph
24 August 2011: WALT explain & comprehend... What Happens When You Are Asleep?
Firstly some people may grind their teeth, suck their thumbs, sleep walk, sleep talk, snore, and pedal their legs. It’s all very embarrassing but you don’t have to worry because it’s all part of life and every one does one or two of them. They will grow out of it.
Secondly your body slows down, your mouth stops making saliva, your heart beats slower, and your breathing slows downs.
As well as that when you sleep you can hear what is going on around you. You would be able to hear the alarm clock or, if you’re like my mother, a baby crying. If you hear anything unusual you would instantly wake up.
Finally while you are sleeping you also dream. Dreaming is when your have a long vision in your head while you are asleep. Nobody knows what their dreams mean. Some people sit with tape recorders and notebooks on their bedside tables. I don’t think our dreams mean anything. They are just there to keep us busy while we are asleep. This is what happens when we are asleep.
Main ideas: sleeping,what can happen when your asleep,what happens to your body,dreaming. My Summery: This story is about what happens when you are sleeping. The things that happen are, your body slows down you might sleep walk or talk and you can dream something.
24.8.11 - WALT infer The Tape Dispenser
To use a tape dispenser is unbelievably easy. It is a wonderful and simple mechanism that holds a roll of tape and dispense it in quantities of your liking.
The contraption is built up of various parts that make it serviceable. Some of the main parts are the jagged metal razor, the plastic body of the dispenser, and the plastic axle in the middle of the body. There is also the foamy grip pad underneath the tape dispenser, which prevents it from sliding and scratching the surface it has been placed on. Some tape dispensers also have sand in the plastic body at the bottom to help weigh it down so it will not slide.
The dispenser is a simple gadget to use. Firstly, the end of the tape should already be stretched onto the razor teeth, so take hold of the tape and tug it gently towards you until it is the length that you require. Be careful not to pull it too hard so you end up with too much tape, and try to avoid cutting your fingers on the metal teeth. Next, pull the tape against the razor in a swift,downwards motion, hence cutting the measure of tape in a straight line. As a result, you can now cut approximate lengths of tape for your work.
As you may or may not already know, a tape dispenser isn’t dependent on electricity or batteries, so it can work anytime, day or night. They are used worldwide in offices, shops, schools, homes, and companies and serve themselves as a reliableworking equipment. They’re cheap and can be used to stick objects together, wrap a present, hold a piece of paper or an item to a surface, or even hold items down.
As the world leaps farther into the technology and science of the future, clever effective equipment such as a tape dispenser will surely stay the simple ingenious tool it has been for many more generations.
•tape presents
•to fix things
•hold thing in place
•to make things
•for grip
25.8.11 -
I have been learning to assess my own writing using our writing progress indicator matrix. I used it to self-assess my first piece of writing for this term. Then I discussed it with Miss Matangi-Hulls so I know where I'm at in my writing learning and my next steps. Here is my matrix...
30 august 2011
Oral Language: WALT explain & present
what i did good:what you could do inside and outside and what can be dangerous.
what i did bad:moving around,look some were alse sometimes.
what i need to work on:stay still and nice loud voice.
2 September 2011 - Goal Setting & Reflections 2011...
9 September 2011 - Gymnastics Movie
23 September 2011: Literacy - WritingWALT explain
Here is our success criteria...
Here is my end of term writing sample... Click here for a full PDF version of my writing with teacher comments... Here is a summary of my writing progress this term...
Click here for my full writing progress indicator matrix...
WALT:explain (analysing an example)
How to make a Hangi
What makes it good...
*gives instructions how to do it
*uses explaining words to do thing properly
*tells you what you need for it
*gives you a suggestion what to do while you wait for it to cook
*good description on the instructions
*uses time explaining words like first and finally
*uses one main idea per paragraph
24 August 2011: WALT explain & comprehend...
What Happens When You Are Asleep?
Firstly some people may grind their teeth, suck their thumbs, sleep walk, sleep talk, snore, and pedal their legs. It’s all very embarrassing but you don’t have to worry because it’s all part of life and every one does one or two of them. They will grow out of it.
Secondly your body slows down, your mouth stops making saliva, your heart beats slower, and your breathing slows downs.
As well as that when you sleep you can hear what is going on around you. You would be able to hear the alarm clock or, if you’re like my mother, a baby crying. If you hear anything unusual you would instantly wake up.
Finally while you are sleeping you also dream. Dreaming is when your have a long vision in your head while you are asleep. Nobody knows what their dreams mean. Some people sit with tape recorders and notebooks on their bedside tables. I don’t think our dreams mean anything. They are just there to keep us busy while we are asleep. This is what happens when we are asleep.
Main ideas: sleeping,what can happen when your asleep,what happens to your body,dreaming.
My Summery:
This story is about what happens when you are sleeping. The things that happen are, your body slows down you might sleep walk or talk and you can dream something.
24.8.11 - WALT infer
The Tape Dispenser
To use a tape dispenser is unbelievably easy. It is a wonderful and simple mechanism that holds a roll of tape and dispense it in quantities of your liking.
The contraption is built up of various parts that make it serviceable. Some of the main parts are the jagged metal razor, the plastic body of the dispenser, and the plastic axle in the middle of the body. There is also the foamy grip pad underneath the tape dispenser, which prevents it from sliding and scratching the surface it has been placed on. Some tape dispensers also have sand in the plastic body at the bottom to help weigh it down so it will not slide.
The dispenser is a simple gadget to use. Firstly, the end of the tape should already be stretched onto the razor teeth, so take hold of the tape and tug it gently towards you until it is the length that you require. Be careful not to pull it too hard so you end up with too much tape, and try to avoid cutting your fingers on the metal teeth. Next, pull the tape against the razor in a swift,downwards motion, hence cutting the measure of tape in a straight line. As a result, you can now cut approximate lengths of tape for your work.
As you may or may not already know, a tape dispenser isn’t dependent on electricity or batteries, so it can work anytime, day or night. They are used worldwide in offices, shops, schools, homes, and companies and serve themselves as a reliableworking equipment. They’re cheap and can be used to stick objects together, wrap a present, hold a piece of paper or an item to a surface, or even hold items down.
As the world leaps farther into the technology and science of the future, clever effective equipment such as a tape dispenser will surely stay the simple ingenious tool it has been for many more generations.
•tape presents
•to fix things
•hold thing in place
•to make things
•for grip
25.8.11 -
I have been learning to assess my own writing using our writing progress indicator matrix. I used it to self-assess my first piece of writing for this term. Then I discussed it with Miss Matangi-Hulls so I know where I'm at in my writing learning and my next steps. Here is my matrix...
30 august 2011 - WALT:infer
30 august 2011
Oral Language: WALT explain & present
what i did good:what you could do inside and outside and what can be dangerous.
what i did bad:moving around,look some were alse sometimes.
what i need to work on:stay still and nice loud voice.
2 September 2011 - Goal Setting & Reflections 2011...
9 September 2011 - Gymnastics Movie
23 September 2011: Literacy - WritingWALT explain
Here is our success criteria...
Click here for a full PDF version of my writing with teacher comments...
Here is a summary of my writing progress this term...
Click here for my full writing progress indicator matrix...